Hi Vedant, maybe you could do something with your scratch project. look and try to find words that are not correct and, look for capital letters. Have fun with the rest.
Hi Vedant You are good at putting the cat right in the middle.Maybe you could make it move or make it more exiting? Why did you only use he cat? From Noah
Hey Vedant I like that you are open to suggestions as to how make your blog entries better! It's a good quality to have as a learner. Maybe try rereading your post and checking for things that need fixing. I tell my niece that same thing and she is 14! How many comments are you waiting to get?
Hi Vedant! Like Anna, Nathan and Marleen said! Please get work checked before you publish. There are SOOO many mistakes. Add cpital letters, correct spelling and punctuation.
Hi Vedant.
ReplyDeleteWell done with the start of your scratch.
Make sure to get your blog checked before you publish.
Hi Vedant, maybe you could do something with your scratch project. look and try to find words that are not correct and, look for capital letters. Have fun with the rest.
ReplyDeleteHi Vedant You are good at putting the cat right in the middle.Maybe you could make it move or make it more exiting? Why did you only use he cat? From Noah
ReplyDeleteHey Vedant
ReplyDeleteI like that you are open to suggestions as to how make your blog entries better! It's a good quality to have as a learner. Maybe try rereading your post and checking for things that need fixing. I tell my niece that same thing and she is 14! How many comments are you waiting to get?
Hi Vedant maybe you could make it a bit longer. Did you just leave that character there. Maybe you could make it a bit more exiting?
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Hi Vedant! Like Anna, Nathan and Marleen said! Please get work checked before you publish. There are SOOO many mistakes. Add cpital letters, correct spelling and punctuation.
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